Whenever you guys (and gals) can check out my scrapbook where I added a couple of s-crap pages of sketches I've been doing on a story. I've called it "Project Sketch" because I'm just moving from panel to panel and page to page without a real story. I'm just making it up as I go. Hopefully this will teach me more about story sequential and I've already gotten good constructive criticism from
[link] (Apples13). If you guys (and gals (again)) have any criticism for the pages, it's all welcome.
Also, if there's a particular way you want the story to turn or things to happen, or anything else you want to see, let me know and I'll incorporate it into the pages.